|Reviews for Eternity|
| Irony's.Last.Words.Were 2/16/07 . chapter 1
Hmm. I like how you blended in the last couple of lines throughout the poem, like "White picket fences" and "the pale moonlight and stars". And I especially liked "A sign that bears the message 'do not enter here'...guards the eternity just beyond."
Though-I'm confused about the last two lines. I don't really understand them.
I enjoyed it.
-Irony' . .
| lostandwandering 1/2/07 . chapter 1
great word graphics