Hmm. I like how you blended in the last couple of lines throughout the poem, like "White picket fences" and "the pale moonlight and stars". And I especially liked "A sign that bears the message 'do not enter here'...guards the eternity just beyond."

Though-I'm confused about the last two lines. I don't really understand them.

I enjoyed it.

-Irony' . .

great word graphics