Aww, well that was sadd.
Bummer.
But, at least she didn't go back into his arms after the whole I love deal. I read that in another story and that was totally bogus.
This girl has some back bone.
YAY SHE"S FEMALE.
Honestly, a girl with out backbone is a man.
But anyways, it was a good story.
But stupid guy.
Why the hell would he cheat on her if he loved her.
Guys suck.
-- x mydecember x
( from reviewers_found)

Well, It's a well written piece, though details are few. I enjoyed it, but the ending just kind of leaves you hanging. I just want to know what happened. Besides that, though, it's a good piece.

Definitely a large contrast from your other stories/characters. From what I gathered he started an affair before they got married, somewhat in the middle of the marriage it ended, now she found out and yeah. Oh, sadness :( It was nice that you gave both points of view on this though. Like it wasn't totally one sided her just leaving, he actually said stuff. Though that still doesn't make it okay in the slightest, but at least we knew what was going on in his mind too. Interesting that he said he loved her after all that... Don't exactly get why he would have an affair if he loved her, but I guess that goes up to the mystery of this.
Good job :)

You know, you could transform this into a long story if you wanted to... I mean, it's not necessary, but it has the potential. I liked the wide range of emotions that come out of this, they're very strong.

Again, grammar and spelling should be checked, but other than that, it was a nice read.

hey. sorry i was almost late reviewing, but i wasnt. woot woot. haha. alright well, i liked this, like alot. it reminds me of the end of a lifetime movie, idk if u r familiar with that tv network but they have lots and lots of womanly life based movies, personally i enjoy it, and i enjoyed this alot. I wish I knew what he was thinking though, that's pretty much the only downfall i saw, and technically it's not a downfall, just something i would have liked to see, but it's your story. Keepin it short is up to you.
Best of Luck in your Writing,
Ashlyn

strong emotions and great dialogue. realistic. can relate to Dianne's emotions. i think the ending is fine. I didn't feel a pressing need for it to continue. (though there is a lot to do with this if u do)

This was quite the moving piece, I liked that you gave us a sense of Dianne's empowerment, she didn't sigh and say "Promise you won't do it again..." and stay..

She kept her pride and walked away, like many women fail to do... even those who are not only cheated on but beaten... (I thinking about writing something about B.W.S)

There were only two stand out grammatical errors...

"You can't take back what you done Mark.." did you mean, "what YOU'VE done" ?

and

"I love you to Mark" shouldn't it be "you TOO" ?

Other than those I can't complain... only good things to say about your writing.

Nicely written, strong and meaningful.

L.L

This goes from angry to cold. Nice. I got shivers from it. The problem is, that for all its supurb brilliance - it needs more. (So I don't like one-shots - shoot me. Well at least one-shots that you actually could add more to.) I mean what happens next? The betrayal scene as a rule should never be the end of any media - it should be followed at least by a coping scene. That's the only fault I have. ::))

I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed this sooner.

Wow. It was a strong piece.

There was such strong dialogue here that I can barely write into my own stories!

[...I know they do, but people are not forgiven for every mistake they make...]

Something like that.

Oh my God. I could actually relate to them both - well, except Mark. I don't care what he says. Cheating scum.

Great piece. Some of the strongest dialogue I've ever had the pleasure of reading!

Wow, quite emotional there. But as Coveredinblood11 said is true, guys can relate to Mark as there are mainly men in this world who think they can do that, and girls can relate to Dianne.

There are a few grammar errors but it's pretty good.

What I like about this, though, is that it gives kind of a real life scene where guys could relate to this Mark guy and girls could relate to Dianne. Nice.