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| Katie Saychiadu 2008-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseHa! I must be very emo at the moment to because this is the second little drabble today that made me cry. Don't worry, I'm not bawling, just a little tear. Good job :) |
| Jo 2007-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI personally think its really great but a bit short.I like it. =] |
| Midnights Scream 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseyou should feel special cause I usually ignore one shots...I have no idea what to this though.I briefly knew two girls who commited suicided and I have to say that's what I wondered too. If I had just talked to them more maybe made a greater attempt to be their freind would they have still done it? So very good with that. And nyuu?What does it mean! |
| Limited Edition 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseHahaha hm quite a cliché plotline, but I like how it's written. I don't know, it's not unique, but nice for a doodle. I've got too much emo too, it's giving me writer's block, grr. |
| Shaqy 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG, write more! Its kinda interesting. Too bad its a one shot. YOU CAN SQUE NOW. |
| inudahentai 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abusewow Rin, I knew you had it in ya to write like this , but for crap its poetic |
| BloodLineDemon 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's really good.. emotion while I'm at it. |
| elleroni. 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuse-gasp- Caffy is actually writing?! oh mm gee. finally. geez. very EMOtional. ;) |
| reallyinnocent2007 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusethough you never knew anybody to have committed suicide it seems so realistic, it seems that you did know somebody. this is really good, i could picture this in my head. anyway this is good, and very discriptive. |
| diebyownhands 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusegrr, fp didn't want me to update. ANywho, this was very nice. I thought it was going somewhere totally diferent from where it did and that is a good thing. It was sad and made you think about how many time we just walk away saying it not my bussiness when we cfould actually help I cry for help unheard, nice |
| xhaiiro 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is so sincere, I love this. |