i just can't help but be completely immerged in your stories. you write so beautifully with your poetic details.

Lovely as always. Shame this is only a oneshot though. You remind me of Anne Rice, the way you write I mean. You fully immerse the reader into the world you set out describe. I think the twins put me in the mindset of the Blackwood Farm set. ;) The eye contact, secret twin thing special bond and all. Never-the-less! Another marvelous chapter to add to your collection.

E! I like! It's very well done, with the wrong note at the climax of the song. Like I said before, unexpected and kind of funny. I guess I have no new words. (Where are the fictionpress alerts? I had to check manually...)