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| fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseo short, and good. |
| Devin-Jamie 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI like this (totally didn't see that coming, right?). Anyway, I like this because it really is like a short story- I can see it in my head, you know? Maybe you don't...Well, good job. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, it portrays emotions well. pieces, bits here and there. not all feeling can by expressed in coherent sentences. good work keep writing |