It flows so nicely; it really does and every word seems to just work beautifully all on its own. Its really beautiful.

Oh. And that last stanza? Brilliant. It completely owned me and, oh yes.

Perfect.

- Noelle

i like this so much! it made me giggle when i got to the last line.

Oh, what a wonderful depiction of post-break up agony. The rhythm and imagery was perfect. Nice!

Love it! The rhythm is really catchy and the wording is just...great!