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poetic abortion
2007-01-04
ch 1,
abuseIt flows so nicely; it really does and every word seems to just work beautifully all on its own. Its really beautiful.

Oh. And that last stanza? Brilliant. It completely owned me and, oh yes.

Perfect.

- Noelle
Earthbound Angel 49
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abusei like this so much! it made me giggle when i got to the last line.
thestonedfox
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abuseOh, what a wonderful depiction of post-break up agony. The rhythm and imagery was perfect. Nice!
Jhureina
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abuseLove it! The rhythm is really catchy and the wording is just...great!
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