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| poetic abortion 2007-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseIt flows so nicely; it really does and every word seems to just work beautifully all on its own. Its really beautiful. Oh. And that last stanza? Brilliant. It completely owned me and, oh yes. Perfect. - Noelle |
| Earthbound Angel 49 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abusei like this so much! it made me giggle when i got to the last line. |
| thestonedfox 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, what a wonderful depiction of post-break up agony. The rhythm and imagery was perfect. Nice! |
| Jhureina 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseLove it! The rhythm is really catchy and the wording is just...great! |