oh!! This has definate potential! I like it! Please update soon.

YAY! More writing from first star of night!
And it's very cleverly written too. Love the weblog bits. Almost makes me wish Edward Herda had access to a computer for a weblog in my story.

And yeah, Clayton is LUCKY. Just... lucky.

Looking forward to reading more of your work,

-Edward 04612

QUITE the interesting story, madame!

can hardly wait for the next installment!

Love the format! Like a blog...that's so cool! Can't wait for the next chapter!