Reviews for The Dead Book Two Point Oh

Reviews For: The Dead Book Two Point Oh

Just Your Average Slacker 2008-01-24 ch 2,	abuseGreat story!! Update soon please! I like the choice in name. And the fact that Frankie's a girl! That usually doesn't happen often! That comment is a bit influenced by the fact that it's my name too :D Please update soon!! ~Frankie~
Jelly Wombat 2007-12-27 ch 2,	abuseHuh. I don't remember the school thing, and I think she noticed her pigment change later the last time around? Yay, at least it's a little different to keep me thinking. I just love all of your unique ideas for the afterlife! Everything is unexpected and interesting to read, and the readers get to be just as confused as the heroine. ^^ I can't wait until you get her settled into her new environment though, and we get to see her at her job. Then things tend to focus more on the characters' interactions with each other and the environment, and that's always my favorite part in any story. (I'm kind of sappy when it comes to that.) So please please please update soon, I'll be checking up and I'm really looking forward to it! (Also, if you want people to be helping in the tiny typo department, only one has jumped out at me so far: In the first chapter, when they're talking about her dead kitten, you accidentally typed "tired" instead of "tried to nurse it back to health.")
Jelly Wombat 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseGah! I read the first version of this! I was really enjoying reading it when it disappeared... It did disappear, right? I'm not psycho or anything? Anyway, just now I was running an idle search of stories that I liked before they were removed from the site(I do that sometimes), and it's a wonderful feeling being able to find one again. I'm faving this ASAP so I can keep closer tabs on it this time. ;) Looking forward to rereading it! I'll try not to lurk too much.
Opal_Listening 2007-01-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseI need for you to update...
The Ferrett 2007-01-20 ch 2,	abuseInteresting second. I'd say that miss heroine is going to get alon fine. ::))
The Ferrett 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI love this first bit. Death rules.
mysunwolf 2007-01-18 ch 2,	abuseIt's even more interesting, and very nice now that it's revised. Good work, keep writing!
Nnaliseaai 2007-01-18 ch 2,	abuseI never read the first one but this one has an awesome seensee of feeling to it like you're actually there. Update soon. I like it.
Gaiawtch 2007-01-10 ch 1,	abuseWell, you cleaned it up alot. Its sad to know that version one's gone, but this one is easier to read. So, good job and update soon.
AliceBowie 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abusewow... just...wow...
AubriannaKnight 2007-01-06 ch 1,	abuseYay... I love this story. I hope you update soon. I don't remember very many small details from version one so I may not notice the differences if they aren't major, but I still can't wait to read it again
Me And Myself 2007-01-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, I loved the first version and I love this version...So, you better keep updating. And keep Death hot...Because...Because I said so!
Phantom-Writer-X 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseYour chapter was impressive. I enjoyed the portrayal of Death. I want to read more.
Sayae 2007-01-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseHahaha...that was good. I like the Grim Reaper...he's hot too. I like this story. A trully meaningless reason to sell your soul but if it meant that much to her...hey! at least she didn't drown. Write more:D!

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