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| Muted Dragon 2007-02-08 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting poem, has a fast beat, adding to the desperate mood. reminds me of breaking benjamin's songs. :) |
| Frore 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseExpressive. I am partial to pieces that paint a picture with vivid imagery, but it would be wrong to call this bad. Keep writing! |
| Shyanne Kai 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI like the narrative voice, though thought it dragged a bit at the end, but overall the poem was very effective. |
| Jarlaxe 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one even better! Thanx for the review? by the way. Not sure what you mean how I review to get reviewed, know one ever reviews on this stupid site anyways, thought I was doing people a favor but watever, oh ya that review you gave me...it was more like a reply, thanx. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseSimply amazing. EB |