"we humanize gods and bring heroes to their knees
- we do not kill the good people."
the best line.
this is perfectly devastating.

all right. firstly: um, WOW. HOLY SHIT. you have written a LOT of stuff and i... im just absolutely enamoured with all of it. but i stopped on this first because i really enjoy (& am intrigued by) the concept behind it. and i definitely believe "power corrupts, but i'm stronger than that." and i sort of understand your ramble. well, more than "sort of"... it's practically the dissertation written by the vaguely mutinous irritation that's been plaguing me for the entire goddamn day.

but anyway. you are my new hero. *clicks the little checky boxes*

secondly: ever read something that's mostly amazing, has more than a few great lines, but there's just something about the structure or flow that has you cringing occasionally? but you can't quite pinpoint what it is? but if you could fix it, it would be perfect?

yeah.

everything you write?

there is absolutely NONE of that feeling.

not one little shred.

i. am. just. ...absolute awe.

this is intriguing. i feel like i know nothing about it and it makes me want to.

"is it murder if you only kill the bad guys? does it matter?"

this reminds me of an indie called boondock saints. you should watch it because it...i guess i'll say, it toys with this idea.

no can do-you're still brilliant.
Mouah
Karo

i love it.

it's got such a jiggy beat...

dig that introspection.

you've written this so that it's easy to believe that killers aren't always the villains, the bad guys.

duality, indeed.

a wonderfully thought-provoking read.