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| Calico.Grace 2007-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow. This is exactly how I feel right now. I like it-- the whole poem is great. The four-liners are simple and to the point. Only one suggestion-- the last stanza is great, but its last two lines don't seem as strong as the two previous ones. I really do like, however, what you said about love and hate both being four letters. Nice job, it's nice to read something that I can relate to. |