Reviews for The Bible Didn't Mention Us

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Enirethac 2008-09-14 ch 6,	abusewhat . . . whyd she punch him? Aww he is soo sweet lol. Those guys crack me up. Update soon!
Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-09-12 ch 6,	abusei love the story! cant wait for more! hope you update soon! --iflyhugs
Lethargiclove not logged in 2008-09-12 ch 6, anon.	abuseAh, I'm happy to see you return to this story! Haha, the right hook just made everything even more perfect. I was so happy when they kissed. But how embarassing must it be to be caught like that? Haha, especially by other ANGELS. Ah, till next time then!
jammi 2008-09-12 ch 6,	abuseLMAO, man, I feel embarrassed for her. On one hand, it's not his fault she laid that kiss on him before checking to see if the other angels were in the room, on the other hand, I think I would've punched him too. I like the fact that you dealt with the issue of 'forbidden love' and had her talk about it with him since she did seperate herself from others and her jumping into a relationship with him would've been out of character. I'm assuming that the angels who stopped by are young angels? because I can't imagine Michael whistling, lol, so I assume that the other older angels wouldn't either. Good to see Isabel even if she didn't hang around and I liek the way we learna bout her family life and boyfriend in a few sentences but it didn't seem off-topic. Their convo flowed naturally and it was enjoyable to read.
Festina Lente 2008-02-23 ch 5,	abuseI love this story. It's so beautifully written and has such originality ... The characters are likable and, heh, for a plot as unbelievable as it is, they are rather believable. I hope to read more soon!
sputnik sweetheart 2007-12-21 ch 5,	abuseagain, i loved this chapter! i'm pretty sure i'm going to love the entire story. this is so well written, Al! it's one of my favorites from you. sorry i couldn't make it to the bday party, i had work (argh). hopefully i'll get to see kuya sonny soon, i haven't seen the baby yet either!
Diamus 2007-12-19 ch 5,	abuseOh wow … This story is amazing!! It’s so different from anything that I’ve ever read, and I’m in love with plot and the characters. Your writing style is impeccable and your storyline is so, so wonderful! Seriously, there are not enough synonyms of the word ‘great’ that I can throw at you … It’s just … one of the very best stories that I have ever read! Ever. Heh. I love Cecille. Her good-natured, almost innocent personality are refreshing and her little feuds with Graham are just too funny! I really love the way you’ve developed these two characters so well, started showing sparks in their relationship, and are now introducing some new characters (who, I guess are not so new!). Honestly, you’re imagination must be awesome because this is just something completely original and entirely intriguing. I love all the biblical references and the complications that are soon to arise … I can only imagine where you’re going with this and I am really looking forward to an update!!
MissVolleyBall 2007-12-18 ch 5, anon.	abuse=] w0w. i realy love yer storiiee i really can wait till the nextt chappiee! =D
LethargicLove 2007-12-18 ch 5,	abuseOh, I so cannot wait to meet the rest of the angel crew. Michael was fun. I generally liked the chapter, although some of the answers to Ce's questions made me even more confused. I loved the line about how men either molested her or weren't human, that made me laugh, haha. Can't wait for chapter 6 then.
sputnik sweetheart 2007-11-15 ch 4,	abusehoy, was this the chapter you had trouble writing?! loved it! and i totally imagined whoopie goldberg as the lady at the store. and i totally imagined the pink ranger as graham (okay, i'm stretching). okay, get to writing! the angels are coming! great writing as always!
yv 2007-11-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseooh! intriguing!
sputnik sweetheart 2007-11-04 ch 3,	abusefinally you update! and yes, the talking should help. haha, i swear you've gone through about 50 different endings. stick with the susie q one! (hope that doesn't give anything away to the other readers). OKAY, GOOD JOB, you should totally make a reference to Ghost - and send me some more chapters.
xtotallyatpeacex 2007-01-21 ch 2,	abuseHey, this looks really interesting so far. Your writing is really good, hope you update again soon. :D
Qzie 2007-01-20 ch 2,	abuse...cliff-hanger. classy. very classy. ANYWAYS. I really like this so far! I think it's funny how uptight Cecille is and how she found her guardian angel (I guess you'd say) making a giant mural in a dark alley, of all places. Also the mention of all the locks on the door made me laugh. I think it's good that Graham is a lot calmer and not so uptight. He'll be a good influence on Cecille, I think. ^^ And yeah... it should be very interesting to hear what he has to say about why only Cecille can see him and all that... so great story so far!
sputnik sweetheart 2007-01-14 ch 2,	abuseAl! I like this - obviously! So you need to hurry up and finish chapter 3, so you can send it to me. NOW.

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