Very interesting take on A.I.
I like how you don't use the word "robot" to describe her even once.

This was very... odd. Not that I mean that in a bad way- on the contrary, I actually find the oddness pretty cool. It's interesting that you have the "well-to-do" families eating healthy. It makes sense, but in my experience more money just allows people to buy more junk food. lol.

Anyway, interesting concept, and I found both Moon and May to be very compelling characters. I'd like to read more about them... though I can't really think of what else you'd do.

On your writing- it's pretty well developed, and I can hear your own voice and heart speaking through your words nicely. You use a good amount of description without going overboard. There were a few akward bits- most notably this sentence: "How dare they, after yelling at the other that time one bought me a popsicle, or for yelling at the other when they bought me an ice cream at the museum." It might have been better to split that into two sentences, or say something more like "How could they say that, when they'd each bought me unhealthy treats on at least one occasion?" or something like that. *Shrug* That's the one real problem I saw- other than that your writing was really good!

Keep posting stuff. ^_^

DLC