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La Vida 2007-05-10 . chapter 1
A really truthful modern outlook on Hollywood and glamour, I think. Only recently have people started to notice that their golden lifestyle is crap in a box.
Very nicely written.
Professional Dreamer 2007-01-08 . chapter 1
"tight tight denim constricting
some gorgeous girl with the bruised thighs" - Amazing

...spanding?

But I love the sentiment behind the poem. So so true.
hey maria 2007-01-02 . chapter 1
I don't even know what trimspa bars are. But I know this poem is very good. I didn't really like the repetition of "hard hard" and "tight tight" but I loved the image of bruises on her thighs, like she wanted to fit in those tight jeans so badly she didn't care about the pain it caused her.
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