 Hannah Rose Williams 2007-09-04 . chapter 1Prince is a great name for a dog.
Wow! This is a very unique plot. I'm in love with it. I'm not sure how 'static' is grammatically correct (maybe you could end "the quotes"- static -"like this"), but hey. Change a few punctuation habits, and you're golden. And much better paced than me, I might add! |
 JennieMR 2007-09-04 . chapter 8Ok, get writing again, cause I need more. :P hehe |
 JennieMR 2007-06-05 . chapter 7MORE! PLease, please, please! I like this because it's so different from other zombie stories, with a blind woman and all. I like Barbara, as she is brave and also has a bit of a feisty button that she holds in check quite well.
Please update soon! |
 AluminumMuse 2007-05-16 . chapter 7Awesome. A really great story. |
 AluminumMuse 2007-05-16 . chapter 2Really wonderful, I love your writting style and you use suspence and dialog very well. One of my favorite stories. |
 D0om Kitty 2007-01-23 . chapter 7O_O wow. I love this story! to me it's almost better than any movie i've ever really read ^^ Wowzers. At first I was skeptical. I thought 'A blind chick... what the hell??' but i am now hooked. Wonderfull job. ^^
Can't wait fer chapie 8 :D |
 Daniel Clarke 2007-01-05 . chapter 1Mason.
Thats fair. I have a tendency with my longer stuff to draw things out longer then I should. And my self-editing skills definitely need work.
Hopefully the next couple of chapters will be better. |
 Mason 2007-01-05 . chapter 7 Eh, not one of your better zombie stories. I noticed a few instances of repetetive wording and awkward sentences, but other than that, fairly solid. |