Reviews for What I Didn't Know

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Criosphinx Airavata 2008-05-05 ch 8,	abuseI've read it. I like it. I want more of it. And I suck at reviews...
paputsza 2007-12-17 ch 2,	abusepinatas originated in spain, and was discovered by marco polo.
Nexas 2007-09-16 ch 8,	abuseHeya this is a really good story ^-^ could u please update it? im dieing to find out what happens next :)
Esquirella 2007-08-08 ch 8,	abuseKen is all kinds of evil, isn't he? But at least he got Markus and Colby into bed.
8lately8 2007-08-07 ch 8,	abuseOMG! i am so hooked to this story its unblievableO.O LOVE IT TONS! such a cute couple^^ wow markus can be quite scary when hes drunk... after falling off the bed hes definatly gonna feel that in the morning>.< but wow the ending of chapter 8 was so heart warming, the heart beat comment was so warm and tuch^^ well i know it might take awhile for an update, im glad the story is not over so soon^^ CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTEr.9! keep up the fabtatious work^^ -8lately8
Narcotic Affliction 2007-08-06 ch 8,	abuseHey, just wanted to say that I like your story and you should keep writing as great as you do now. So please Update soon, okie dokies?
dreamerdoll-is-2-lazy-2-log... 2007-08-04 ch 8, anon.	abuseAww, you're so sweet. I always love your replies, so I think we're even; you're like the only person I know who gives me such awesome replies, and I love them. I'm always like "Thanks for reading" when I see those comments, because really what else is there? But it is better than nothing, a WHOLE lot better, I must agree...and way better than flamers, too, because those just irritate me... I would HURT someone if I was the mascot; ours plays with the cheerleaders, and I really couldn't handle that...I would cheerfully maim someone. I like Colby as the mascot; I can totally picture it! Chapter eight...wow, what is there to say that you haven't already heard?! (sorry i'm late, btw, on vacation with no fictionpress...:() Seriously, FANTASTIC! I never pictured the whole drunk twist thing, so that was great. :D Seriousl,y very unexpected and creative and terrific. and they are so cute, how he was like "i thought you were mad at me", and then how Markus was seriously PMSing but still checked on him when he wasn't home...and I was ready to KILL him when he ignored Colby after he defended them...stupid jerk. Really, not impressed with Ken by the way! Gah...don't like him at ALL...but the end was amazing...and haha, I could totally see that, because that's something I would say, starting to think like the girls...haha...anyway, terrific job with this...I can't wait to see the wake up! the next chapter, i'm sure will only be more fantastic tan this one; which, I assure you, is quite a feat. But you always somehow manage...totally jealous! Terrific job, can't wait to read more...now I'm going to reread...:D Have fun in college! dreamerdoll
Love Eternally 2007-08-04 ch 8,	abuseyay! an update! and it cute, can't wait for more.
portabellaprincess 2007-08-04 ch 8,	abuseThis is getting god! Markus is one unruly drunk; at least he was able to get closer to Colby! ;)
Abstruse Blue 2007-07-23 ch 7,	abuseNiice. I am really enjoying this fiction! I adore the characters. Please update soon!
Nexas 2007-07-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseThis is so good, i want to read more, i can't wait for them to get together1
Faerie Storm Queen 2007-06-20 ch 7,	abuseOh, the angst of highschool! I want to just slap the boys and make them see that they're in love... You're doing a great job with the characters, keep it up!
Esquirella 2007-06-13 ch 7,	abuseThis is a really amazing cast of characters. Great job!
dreamerdoll 2007-06-13 ch 7,	abuseOh, I'm sure that you have plenty of absolutely devoted readers! And trust me, nothing you write could disappoint! Seriously, I ADORED this chapter...and I like it generally when it takes longer for them to get together; all the build up makes that point seem that much sweeter! And I'm glad you like my rather rambling reviews...that's really the only type I like to leave, as I rather hate reading the "this was interesting. update soon." And it's not that I don't appreciate it, because I do, it's just that you're looking for more substance, more feedback...and I'm a rather chatty person (if you couldn't guess! :D), so I like to be able to talk back to people, and "thanks" only goes so far. And as you said, on bad days, it is a nice pick up to get a longer, nicer review. Aw, I hope everything gets better for you, but I know what you mean. I hate all those overwhelmingly horrible bad days. So, since you like knowing what was liked and what wasnt...I'll have to go back and find them again! Well, I hate his mother. I like her as a plot device, basically, but seriously, HATE the woman! As I'm sure you can relate. And actually, I like Gerald, just because his character amuses me. And I can seriously understand why Markus got rather ** off, as he felt left out and unimportant, but seriously, how long has he known Colby? Not that long. Of course he is uncomfortable sharing things with Markus that he is comfortable sharing with Elizabeth; they've been best friends for way longer! And the whole mascot scene was to die for! Brilliant job, absolutely creative. Terrific, my dear, terrific! Can't wait to read more from you, as usual your chapter was amazing! dreamerdoll
TwilightTreader 2007-06-13 ch 7,	abuseWow. I feel the pain that went into writting the first part of this chapter. It's almost like I could see the schools as I went down the highway and I just imagined that long drive from your house to the "local" grocery store. XD I know you've had to take that journey more than once before. It was cool to see that show up in your writting. ^_^ That and the whole year book ad thing. Ohh. I know how you feel about those. >.o; I'm glad you updated! Maybe now you won't be so harassed, even for alittle while. :D Maybe I'll get something up soon too. You're an inspiration! teehee and... Sorry about the Pervis thing. I so totally didn't know. ^^; (it's still a funny name though...runs away )

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