AWESOME FIC!
Totally in love with it, MORE?!?!??

I LOVE your story! :D However, 13 lines (or something like that, I can't count) from the bottom, instead of Colbie, you put Coredan...0.0 BTW i love that story too! ^.^

I love love love this story. I'll admit that when I first started reading it, the characters of the girls almost made me hit the back button, but I stuck with it and am so glad I did. I can't wait to see what happens with Colby and Markus. This story is definitely on my favorites list.

You know it's great. Even though this is a cliche story line you succeed in making it sound original. I just realized that I despise the word Kudos...o.O... anyway! I hope you post again soon : p

awesome story, keep it up!

GOSH DARN the police! They have such bad timing. I actually ended up re-reading everything and reading the new chapter I hadn't read haha it's still so good! I really enjoy the characters and the banter between the girls. Gah, I want more! This killing me but in a deliciously good way. Poor Colby, he jumps to conclusions so quickly and yeah more bad timing. Lovely chapter!

I hope the chapter 11 will be posted really soon! Your text is amazing...

Yay you finally updated, its only been like a year lol.
This story is really good, your really good at suspense. Please keep updating :)
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"I...I only..." What? O_O Stupid cops. I wanna hear what markus was about to say! D8

omg. great update! You updated! I'm overwhelmed with happiness! I love to see what you've got up your sleeves next! Congratulations, mi amiga! And make sure you get enough sleep! ^_^

Wow. Does he realized Markus was laughing from relief . . . sigh. such a dork

Ha, ha, ha, this story is wonderfully entertaining! Just be sure to look over what you type--reading out lound to yourself works the best, since you can catch mistakes that way--to correct minute errors. Good job, though!

haha...the hamster thing was super funny :)

oh wow. That was great. XD They're so awkward and adorable. And I still love how you and the others are like their fairy guides.

Its amazingly realistic. And Markus is SO dragging Colby around! I swear he's doing it on purpose! lol XD

Great job with the chapter! Good luck with the others ;3

I am in love with this story.I love Colby and Markus an I can't wait until they admit thier feelings!Keep up the good work :)

I've read it. I like it. I want more of it. And I suck at reviews...