Reviews for The Patron Saint of Abhorrence

Reviews For: The Patron Saint of Abhorrence

Hax Rook 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abusei especially liked "ripping as raw", especially in context.. youve taken some risks with bulky words and pulled off a clean piece somehow :)
Evenunderscore 2007-03-18 ch 1,	abuselisten, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours.
mac1012 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseGREAT poem! I haven't read poems with such powerful rhyming words lately and I kinda missed that.. This was just what I needed to refresh my mind with the rhymes.. :) wonderfully magnificently beautifully written!!.. --> if that makes sense.. hehe! i sure am overusing the adjctivs.. hehe.. keep it up! cheerio
Shadows in the Fire 2007-01-30 ch 1,	abuseOne word;wow.
His Mercy's Waiting 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseFantastic rhyming. I liked the feel of the entire poem. Keep up the great writing! :)
Anaare 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseA darkly beautiful poem. The rhyming seemed somewhat forced sometimes, but the final stanza makes everything all right. Good work and thank you for the review (and the others)!
Ripped wings of a Butterfly 2007-01-19 ch 1,	abusehi! really good with the ryhming here & choose of words.. Abhorrence really looks appropriate here.. Another great poem! arkana-rippedwings God Bless!
MikaelaBanes 2007-01-10 ch 1,	abuseYo that was great. What I really luved was that it: 1) rhymed (because I cant rhyme things) 2) made sense (because I cant rhyme things that make sense either!) So great job. A+ you portrayed it very well!! :)
ChildeOfChaos 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseThis has really great flow and I love the rhyme. The last stanza is great. Excellent job!
Guess Who? 2007-01-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story is short. Are you going to add more to the story? I hope so. Anyway, anoter great one!

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