i especially liked "ripping as raw", especially in context.. youve taken some risks with bulky words and pulled off a clean piece somehow :)

listen, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours.

GREAT poem!

I haven't read poems with such powerful rhyming words lately and I kinda missed that.. This was just what I needed to refresh my mind with the rhymes.. :)

wonderfully magnificently beautifully written!!.. --> if that makes sense.. hehe! i sure am overusing the adjctivs.. hehe..

keep it up!

cheerio

One word;wow.

Fantastic rhyming. I liked the feel of the entire poem. Keep up the great writing! :)

A darkly beautiful poem. The rhyming seemed somewhat forced sometimes, but the final stanza makes everything all right. Good work and thank you for the review (and the others)!

hi! really good with the ryhming here & choose of words.. Abhorrence really looks appropriate here.. Another great poem!

*arkana-rippedwings* God Bless!

Yo that was great. What I really luved was that it:

1) rhymed (because I cant rhyme things)
2) made sense (because I cant rhyme things that make sense either!)

So great job. A+ you portrayed it very well!! :)

This has really great flow and I love the rhyme. The last stanza is great. Excellent job!

This story is short. Are you going to add more to the story? I hope so. Anyway, anoter great one!