I would love to find just 1 finished story on this web site. The story could be good, but it's not complete so I can't tell you

Wow, that made me gasp and hold my breath. Nicely written Daniel =D

Oh, this one was nice, sad and spooky. I hope there will be more! No pressure though.

Yeah, I figured poor Dennis is slightly nuts now. I hope that someone comes who can really help him. Zombie stories with happy endings are great... lol.

Please update soon.

Yes, well, now that you've reduced me to trembling in my computer chair at 1:40 in the morning... *quivers* I have this irrational fear of zombies. No really, I have the most horrific nightmares.. I think I should seek counselling. Wow, but honestly, its been a while since I've actually been spooked by a story. So kudos to you for reducing me to a quivering mass, hah, great job. I'm going to go get a gun and sleep with now.

OMFG

Woah.

O-O

Please update. O-O

Oh, no! Why? Now Dennis is all alone again... Well, you did tell me that the next chapters were going to be a doozy.

Whoa, interesting chapter (I still like how all these chapters are very well written). Update soon!

Wow, very unique story! It's pretty good. Update soon!

Really great story. You have made something that could have been monotous delightful. I'll be interested to see how this ends. One suggestions that I would make would be to develop the characters more fully, and have a bit more of Tammy as she is creepy. You should try to avoid plotting things that the characters don't seem like they would so just to move along the story (attacking Tammy, for instance, seems out of character). Other than that, though, quite brilliant.

Oh, good another happy chapter. but that note at the beginning concerns me. What do you mean by the next two chapters will be a "doozy"? i'm freaking out already.

Again, this chapter ended on a happy note. that's a yay for me, cuz the happiness is good. but i'm still not letting myself get too hopeful.

Wow, you're a wicked good writer. I can't believe how you make me picture it so clearly. You make me feel sympathetic to even the evilest characters!

I'm not sure whether to bother having hope. This makes me think that there could be a happy ending after all... Is it false hope?

This suspense is eek-inducing, keep it up.
Reminds me of film 28 Days Later a bit.. If you haven't seen it it'd interest you.