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Reviews For: Of Summer and Speedo's

lucid lives
2007-06-16
ch 1,
abusehehehe,
that was cute :)
Sydney
2007-06-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseHAHAHHAHAHA! I love it its very funny!
fancy feet
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abusehey those three r so cute i think u should do a couple stories with them in it kinda like a comic without the picture u no not just like a book good anyways tho
magalina
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abuselol

This was cute. I`m gonna read your other story now ^_^
DeviantHeart31
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseThe End made me laugh, because she comes out of nowhere and says she wears speedos. i was like wtf for a second. I guess just work on your grammar i say, but otherwise i loved it, it was funny:]
supergal
2007-01-03
ch 1,
abuseYou capture the feeling of friendship superbly in this chapter! One thing you can work on is grammar. It's just little mistakes, but add them all up and they can get kind of eye catching. Just to keep you noted. All right, keep writing!!


:) supergal
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