hehehe,
that was cute :)

HAHAHHAHAHA! I love it its very funny!

hey those three r so cute i think u should do a couple stories with them in it kinda like a comic without the picture u no not just like a book good anyways tho

lol

This was cute. I`m gonna read your other story now ^_^

The End made me laugh, because she comes out of nowhere and says she wears speedos. i was like wtf for a second. I guess just work on your grammar i say, but otherwise i loved it, it was funny:]

You capture the feeling of friendship superbly in this chapter! One thing you can work on is grammar. It's just little mistakes, but add them all up and they can get kind of eye catching. Just to keep you noted. All right, keep writing!!


:) supergal