awe thats really sad, i can't believe she got hit by a car, twice? right? she lost him now he's losing her how ironic, i guess fate has a way of doing things like that even though you are the author and all but yeah, thanks for updating. ^-^

haha i should have expected that to happen but you still threw me in for a loop..lol..at least let them have a happy ending yea?? :D

wow, that was...totally unsightly...
aw what's everyone to do?!?!?!?!? wah! the tension!

this chapter was awesome, i'm glad you got them back together all thou some part of me was hoping she would end up with Song Baekkyung but just a little part of me, but i'm really glad you up date. thanks

Oh my god, i don't even know where to start, Let's begin with Danny shall we, what is wrong with that boy?!
I mean i get the fact that he was looking after MiYeon for his brother's sake, really but what's the deal with him walking away in this chapter? he could've talked it out with her right here and now! He makes me so frustrated about the whole situation. But then again, i suppose there wouldn't be a purpose to the story if they talked it out immediatly, would there?
EunHye makes me angry as well, but that's mostly because i always say what's on my mind, and if someone isn't treating me right, they'd know it immediatly. Everytime i want her to say something or to just scream to them how big of a hypicrites they all are!! it makes me so mad i sometimes scream at the screen.. yea.. but who cares, my family already knows i'm crazy anyways ^^' lol
okey and what's with MiYeon? i thought she was so in love with Danny, and all of a sudden she's macking with his brother? i mean, isn't love supposed to be stronger? she seems so superficial..
anyways.. I hope you're not offended or anything, because i truly love this story... it's just that the character make me mad sometimes ^^'
So keep it up, i love it!!

oh yea.. you said that it is better sometimes to read a story all in one go.. and you're absolutely right. Especially since i'm so forgetfull, i read so many books and fan fics, that it's hard to remember that i was reading a specific story, let alone what chapter, and what it was about!
So i usually read the stories in one go.. i usually don't even check out some stories if they only have less than approximitaly 15 chapters.. except some authors that are just great ^^
okey anyways.. i have to go.. since it's awfully late, i hope you'll update soon enough, i really want to know what Eunhye is going to say to Danny!! :P
hopefully there will be some insight on Danny's brother and MiYeon as well, what caused her to change her mind?

btw.. i really love the names, how did you come up with them?

okey byes.. xoxo indijana

haha, poor BaekKyung. poor poor boy. must be so hard for him

OMG! I just read 37/38 chapters in one go!! Seriousy, i love this story! I just looked over your profile and realised you haven't updated in a while, so.. i though i'de leave you a message, please update!! omg i am seriously hooked ^^'

xoxo indijana

this was honestly a disappointing ending.

Danny's reasoning first of all kind of sucks. There is not enough force behind it to hurt someone else the way he did.

Also, he started to go out with Miyeon after his brother came back. Does that make sense? His brother is back so he can take care of Miyeon instead of Danny.

Also, you left way too many blanks throughout the story.

And once again, the self-pity is borderline disgusting.

I was really excited about reading this because to be honest I am extremely Korean crazed, but I have to say that this was a bit disappointing.

You can make it better by taking out most of the repeated fluff, and allowing consistency in your story. Also, you should give a better reason for Danny hurting Eunhye like it was a forced marriage/engagement or something.

Also, when Danny's hyung came back, you left a complete blank for the readers by not furthering on his reentrance to the scene.
It didn't make much sense.

Good luck.

now the sympathy i previously felt for her is completely gone because she keeps going on to these self-pity, dramatic rants.

there's a lot of repetition going on in this story.
for the past few chapters you've repeated the same thing over and over again.

you should expand because there's no point to Eunhye's repeated self-pity.

because her self-pity appears so much, the initial empathy and sympathy a reader might feel for her is completely reduced to disgust, at least in my case, of her inability to lift herself up.

her dependency on Danny is dragged out too much and too long

there's a lot of inconsistency in your story
Ex): you randomly go off explaining about how no one knows where the two main characters stand in their relationship while you were in the middle of describing Taebin teasing Eunhye about his suggestive remark



Though I'm not sure if it's because I'm unnaturally Korean crazed, I am enjoying your story

it has many elements of Korean dramas

AH...everything's cleared up now...
But I don't think Danny should have interpreted it that way..
He shouldn't have taken care of MiYeon like that just because his brother asked...He could have taken care of her in a friendly way..or told EunHye what he promised...
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go danny

WHAT A CLIFFHANGER! T_T

good boy! it's about time too!