"gather sunshine in my fingers" - i like it

lovely piece...intriguing question at the end of it too. Very thought-provoking. Great job!

I think I know what you mean by pretending to be white. Purity (of any sort) is a difficult topic because there aren't many examples you can point to. The use of colors to illustrate your purpose was very effective. Not at all bad for one who claims not to be a poet. :)

A stunning analogy between the elusiveness of purity and a melting Winter's snow! It seems as though you are alluding to the Sun as sin... What an original choice of imagery!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. The imagery is so strong, I love this.

That was absolutely beautiful, amazing, thought-inspiring, the list goes on and on. I don't know what else to say about it.

I'd also like to thank you for reviewing "That Apathetic Elf", and to tell you, just in case you're interested, that the first chapter is now up.

Wonderful poem, and thanks again for reviewing my story.

~The Wingless Raven