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| Jesus Loves 2008-05-07 ch 16,  | abuseMAKE A SEQUEL add oil :D |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-05-02 ch 4, | abuseamorcito, means my love and sugar is azucar. just so you know |
| FieryBrunette 2008-03-16 ch 16, | abuseokay, I read this entire story and I have a few things to say. it was over-all pretty good, but i was most dissapointed in the fact that she never got the pants back by taking them off, which would have tied into the title a lot more. second, your pacing was a little off and i wasn't always aware of what was going on. this probably makes me sound like a big bit** but i really did like the idea and Evan has my vote in all physical battles. |
| GANGSTAR 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAh, excellent excellent story. I can't wait to read the sequel. Love the trailer by the way :) |
| asdf 2008-01-26 ch 15, anon. | abuseShe is my someone and I am hers cute. |
| yo. 2008-01-26 ch 12, anon. | abusei would kill for three jeans for the price of one. |
| f 2008-01-26 ch 6, anon. | abusegyrating is hot whenever i read the word gyrate in your stories, i gyrate a little bit myself |
| a 2008-01-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseGrey's Anatomy is **. And so is your story. =) |
| A 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh-oh! Interesting. I'm already liking this... |
| Jaded Panic 2008-01-20 ch 16, | abuseOh I really hope Wendy and Seth don't break up. :( That would be so upsetting. TT_TT And oh no! Brody moving? Poor Evan. Ek. This story was awesome. You did a great, fantastic, fabulous, fantabulous, wonderful, amazing, adjective, adjective job on this! Eek. Off to check out your other stuff now. :) |
| Jaded Panic 2008-01-20 ch 15, | abuseOh boo, only one more chapter? *cries* Yay they're official! And the "someone" is really cute. *loves* Great job. :) |
| Jaded Panic 2008-01-20 ch 14, | abuseOh the crazy uncle from before? And boo on the parental units for coming home. Bo! But the karaokee and the chocolate and Syd tricking her into thinking that they had had a kid...too adorable. *loves* Great job! |
| Jaded Panic 2008-01-18 ch 12, | abuseNeu! Gah! TT_TT Poor Evan and Syd. Syd's friends just don't have a hint of common sense. Dumb boys. :( Great job. :) Off to the next chapter! |
| Jaded Panic 2008-01-18 ch 11, | abuseYeah, Jaded is in a fangirl coma right now, so this is her subconscious talking. OMG, Evanegline defending Syd! I almost died right there! But then the KISSES. That's what sent me into coma land! And now, I'm guessing that Julie's person is Brody, maybe? I don't know if that would work with the timeline though...hm. Anyway, adorable chapter. Mep. Awesome job. |
| Jaded Panic 2008-01-18 ch 10, | abuseGO TEAM SYD! Knock Brody down, man! Gr everytime there's a cutesy moment - every time! - Brody just *POF* appears out of nowhere! (It's kind of pathetic that I'm getting so worked up over this, haha.) My heart broke for Syd a little when Evangeline said that to him. I was like, "Guh! Stupid! Watch your mouth!" :( Great chapter! ^^ |