That was so sweet! Inter-racial relationships for the win! x

AW. this is friggan adorable

Now, this is the kind of story that makes you go "Aw" at the end. I really liked it. Wonderful story.

i love this so much! most slash i've read on ficpress has normal to great looking characters; there never seem to be any characters dealing with the problem of being overweight. i also like how the two boys are different races, because that's not something you see on ficpress either. well done!

Thing I loved about the story most is that Jamal liked Brenden when he was big. Beauty isn't skin deep and all. It was a sweet story and for all it's sap, you made up for it in good characters and writing :P Haha.

that was so cute. i love type stories like this. i really really liked it. ^_^

aw. it is! so cute!

Eep. It's been a while since I've read anything here, but your stories are amazing as ever. I love how you never write about two perfect, cliche skinny white guys together - all your writing is original and unique, not to mention well-done. You always seem to get your point across, in as many or few words as you choose, and I just wanted to thank you for that. Thank you for writing, and for sharing it with all of us. I for one appreciate it very, very much. :)

It's like no slash I've ever read, but it's realistic and it's cute. I love it! I love the characters -- Jamal sounds like such a sweetheart! I loved his last line, too. "It wasn't easy being in love with this big white dude, but...s'all cool." I love how he talks, too. ^^ Great story -- I love it!

Really sweet story, I don't know why I have never read it. Jamal is the sweetest of all XD

Yes! It was ADORABLE! YAY! hi5 for awesomeness!

Oh gosh, you made me "aw" all over this.

I love the white guy/black guy thing, I think it's very sweet. I really enjoyed these two characters and their relationship. It's making me feel all giddy.

Thank you so much for writing. I hope you write more.

holy jebus!
tons sweet yes! :D
weell done ^_^

xD Yes. It's a really sweet story. :D Really really sweet. :D :D xDD hehe. xD

=)

That was soo cute! It just filled me up with happiness inside. :D