I think I found my paradise... over 80 stories of slash. Dreams do come true.
And as I love "Love notes" I'm sure I will be reading your stories for quite some time now.
I love that there are more aspects to this story then the usual falling in love and/or the discrimitation from society, which is lovely as well, but you wrote it as it could happen in real life, when love just... happens, and sometimes between totally different people.
The story was just so adorable and amazing, that it's hard to say anything.
I'm amazed that I got even this far, I guess the giddiness I got from "Love notes" gave me the energy to actually write a review, which is quite a big deal for me.
So... thank you for this awesomeness!

Great characters. Great story. Loved it! :)

That was so sweet! Inter-racial relationships for the win! x

AW. this is friggan adorable

Now, this is the kind of story that makes you go "Aw" at the end. I really liked it. Wonderful story.

i love this so much! most slash i've read on ficpress has normal to great looking characters; there never seem to be any characters dealing with the problem of being overweight. i also like how the two boys are different races, because that's not something you see on ficpress either. well done!

Thing I loved about the story most is that Jamal liked Brenden when he was big. Beauty isn't skin deep and all. It was a sweet story and for all it's sap, you made up for it in good characters and writing :P Haha.

that was so cute. i love type stories like this. i really really liked it. ^_^

aw. it is! so cute!

Eep. It's been a while since I've read anything here, but your stories are amazing as ever. I love how you never write about two perfect, cliche skinny white guys together - all your writing is original and unique, not to mention well-done. You always seem to get your point across, in as many or few words as you choose, and I just wanted to thank you for that. Thank you for writing, and for sharing it with all of us. I for one appreciate it very, very much. :)

It's like no slash I've ever read, but it's realistic and it's cute. I love it! I love the characters -- Jamal sounds like such a sweetheart! I loved his last line, too. "It wasn't easy being in love with this big white dude, but...s'all cool." I love how he talks, too. ^^ Great story -- I love it!

Really sweet story, I don't know why I have never read it. Jamal is the sweetest of all XD

Yes! It was ADORABLE! YAY! hi5 for awesomeness!

Oh gosh, you made me "aw" all over this.

I love the white guy/black guy thing, I think it's very sweet. I really enjoyed these two characters and their relationship. It's making me feel all giddy.

Thank you so much for writing. I hope you write more.

holy jebus!
tons sweet yes! :D
weell done ^_^