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| CHIIJOY 2007-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseThe priest usually gives like some kind of pep tak followed by a prayer for the person to say but that priest could have been shocked. I liked the writing style since the regret of the main character was expressed very well. “It wasn’t your fault. I liked it when you went fast. It gave me reason to hold you all the more tighter.” ^ favorite sentence. Great job. :D |
| elleroni. 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abusewho DOESN'T like bitch slapping. duh. what gender? hmm/ seems male, but knowing you, it could be a female. |
| diebyownhands 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseaw, this was sweet. |