wow, your poems are so deep, yet so understandable. it feels like you are writing from experience. i really like it. keep it up!

quite disturbing but good frantic kind of pace to it. there's a spelling mistake in 'quiet' should have been quite. is it supposed to be seperated into stanzas? or just one long column? anyway nice work.

LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem. Love the Kinks reference, your specialty. It's great. It's wonderful. I always love what you do with your poems. There's not a word for it; it just is. This is so great. you're really an inspiration =). Awesome job.