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| UnhappyPeople 2007-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is great. It's disorienting, a bit trippy, very funny and easy to get into right from the start. Weird how Freud and Jung sounded more like philosophers, though. It'd be fun if they started arguing about what's going on in the person's subconscious and you brought in concepts like Anima/Animus, the Shadow, the Child, etc. But that's me going off on a psychology-geek tangent ... All in all, very nice work with chopped-up prose. It's almost like stream-of-consciousness taken literally. Loved it. |
| WakingDreamland 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuse100 points for being witty! I really liked this. Your very talented, ya know. Haha. Excuse my lack of eloquence but at this point in the day my mind is shot. I look forward to reading more. Love Caitlyn |