You and your son are great. I love this kind of story. Kudos.

Cheers,
After Death

i thing that you still gotta put this on or else someone might put out an alert saying that you posted a fanfiction story, people like that are pricks

aw es muy ternurita esta historia!

y los dibujos de andres son hermosos! ya sabes que para mi el ultimo es el mejor de todos!!

tendrian que escribir mas seguido vos y andres jeje.

Podrias armar tu libro de cuentos infantiles jaja...ojo es una buena idea...

besotes!

I loved it! And I'd love to read more! This is kind of stuff I like to see on fictionpress, if you read my story PATRICK AND AMANDA, you'll see what I mean! Tell your son I loved his story! Thanks for the good read...

- KidBomb -

there's something about the mother-son collaboration that makes me squee!

Aww. That's so adorable. What an odd way to make a friend, haha.

Au esta historia es super tierna.
Que la hayas escrito con tu hije me da mucha ternurita.

ME hace acordar a como es cuando llevamos al sobrinito de Pipi a la playa jaja.

Asegurate de poner los dibujos!