I like it alot, it is some nice metafiction. One thing. God should be capitalized because it is a proper name. It does not have anything to do with the fact that he is "omnipotent" I am Blue, supposedly, I am a human. God is a god. Zeus is also a god, Buddha is a buddha, Mohammed is a prophet, and Lirem is the name of a human who wrote a very nice albeit blurred (haha) story. also it should be written God's as it is possessive in this sense. Hopefully that is helpful. Excellent content by the way I really enjoyed the subjectivism. I added it to my C2. If this is not agreeable to you I apologize and will take it down if you ask.

Thanks so much for the story.

Blue