Aww...That was sad! But I liked it! Great job, please update soon!

That was a long chapter! Good job. There was only one thing that I didn't like, I didn't like how you made Jack actually rob something. Because in AA, she doesn't actually commit the crime. But, it's your story. Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Oh...It was so good! I feel so bad for Sara, and you did the Grandmother so well!! I can't wait for more! Please UPDATE SOON! :)

This storyline sounds a little familiar...lol!! I like it, PLEASE UDATE SOON!