Hey i just read your story and i loved it! I was looking for finished storys and found it. I read it in one sitting. I just couldnt stop i had to know if they had a happy ending. You are an amazing wrighter keep up the good work.

A very excellent and memorable story.

I would strongly recommend that you copyright this story. In the future, as your writing skills continue to improve, this story would make an excellent novel.

Loved it! Can't really have much to say aside all of the talent you carry :D

Hmmm... I didn't particularly like it. There wasn't much of a plot, and it was quite boring...

Loved the story XD

My goodness that was one hell of a story u should get it published you know! Needless to say i loved it. :)

I really loved it in the end! It's really well written, doesn't has negligible grammar and punctuation errors and the storyline is just amazing! Although, it seemed as though the ending was a bit rushed, but still a good ending!

I'm really not sure whether you'll ever read this review, considering I'm about 5 years late, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story and am so glad that you left it up! This is definitely going onto my favourites list.

Cheers,
TQL

His reminds me of a story that I read when I was really young, about seven or eight. From memory, it was called Jeremy Jeremiah. Not sure how yours will pan out but it seems interesting so far.

Cheers,
TQL

wow, i'm shocked when you revealed 's identity. I keep guessing that he is the future of bitter Nick. and I never stop wondering how you will tie a knot at the end of the story. i'm glad it turns happy ending! I enjoy reading this wonderful story!

I love this! For a while I was wondering how/if you'd keep them together at the end, and I'm really glad you did 3

I really really enjoyed it!

Sweet end...

Mira

Wonderful! But Mr Andrews is really creepy!

Mira

I tried to finish it. I really did. But it's so POORLY WRITTEN. You're not very creative or imaginative. Your writing is bland. Your grammar is atrocious. You are unbelievably incorrect when it comes to facts. Please take some writing classes of some sort.

So... Your story was soooo good I literally just finished it in a few hours. It's now past 4 am and I think I should go to bed. I'll check to see if you have any more stories posted in the morning. :)

Oh my gosh, this was so sweet. The whole journey was fantastic. I am officially in love with Nicholas Lockwood. He's so gorgeous. And Alice is just awesome-so is Chick. Holy crap! This is damn depressing. While this may not be the most ethereal or linguistically perfect or breathtaking story I have EVER read, it is definitely memorable. I absolutely adored the whole read. Anyway, back to depressing...I wish a bloody hot guy would pop into my bedroom! Holy hell.

You are a great writer. You managed to intrigue me in plot and of course, character. This was very original; I've never heard about walls separating people chronologically.

Fantastic story. I LOVE Nicholas.

Cheers,

xkcbby