"The windows gleamed like the eyes of watching beasts..." (Hey, I love this, it's superb description!)

Wow, I've never, ever realized that Mr. Andrews is Nicholas's grandson. Nevertheless, I'm happy that Nicholas is truly free.

I'm very, very sorry, but I still think that "nicholice" sounds like some sort of candy.

I'm curious--is Nicholas Catholic or Protestant? Anyway, he seems to be lusting after Alice... Nicholas, you're NAUGHTY.

Oh gosh, Chick thinks that Nicholas is Alice's boy toy, yet Nicholas doesn't know that Chick has been teasing him?! Haha, it's indeed a funny moment.

Hahaha, I'm amused that Nicholas is so... conservative. I would like to show him some hot pants and miniskirts, then ask him, "Hey, aren't them scandalous?"

Well, Alice's fears are perfectly understandable. Even if I'll gain a million dollars in return, I won't want to share my house with strangers.

Uncle Alfred is blatantly rude, gosh.

I bet that this story will be very, very interesting. So far, I can picture the characters well, which means that you should be proud of your excellent characterization. I wonder whether Nicholas will run away from home or rebel against Uncle Alfred. If he continues to suffer in silence, he might eventually lose his sanity...

This is a really sweet story! I really, really like it! It made my day.

Wish I had a smart gorgeous man walking through my wall. . .

OMG! that was the most flippin AMAZING! story EVER! seriously, that was AWESOME!

I absolutely love Nick's character! Seriously, you did well with him. He's completely adorkable and hot at the same time! This story is really good (I seriously finished it in one sitting...started reading at like 11 and it's 3:07 am right now). Good job and keep using that amazing creativity!

~Celtic Light

AWESOME story! I can't believe I read that all in one day! But once i strted, i just couldn't stop.
FAVES ^^

WOW...only the first chapter in and wow...this story has really captured my interest, and your style of writing is amazing good job!
Now...off to read more ^^

GREAT STORY!
:D
Few people are able to write stories as detailed as this - and you're one of them. (:
Nice read.

I love this story... it is great. XD

That was BEautiful! I totally love it!