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atreyu love
2008-07-22
ch 18,
abusei LOVE it.
they are so cute together and im glad
he found a place and adjusted to the 21st century ;)
atreyu love
2008-07-22
ch 14,
abuseaww. they FINALLY kissed! :D
atreyu love
2008-07-22
ch 9,
abuseaww. nick and alice should def. be together.
but who exactly is the Mr Andrews guy?
JC Delacy
2008-07-17
ch 18,
abuseI loved this story so much. I had read it a long time ago but never reviewed because i didnt have a FP account but now that I have: OMG, I LOVED IT!
MiseryLovedHer
2008-07-12
ch 8,
abusewow! i really liked the part where nic heard the song that was playing in alice's room. es after i downloaded the song and played it as i re-read the scene... its wow...
i can just see it in my head.
that's really ingenius of you. :D
ToTheWind.
2008-07-09
ch 18, anon.
abusebangbangstartagain tells a heart softening story of two young people in a not your everyday relationship. Alice (the leading female) provides the humor of this story and I'll admitt, more than once i laughed out loud, causing innocent bystanders to worry about their safety. Nicholas (the leading male) is a pure gentleman, the kind that every girl wishes she had; I have developed a crush on him that's so bad, it takes pathetic to the next level =P. Alice is from the 21th century; Nick is from the 19th century. They meet through a wall in Alice's bedroom, which is also Nick's. By going through the wall, Nick can enter the 21th century and vice versa with Alice in the 19th century. I seriously thought that was an effing stroke of genius. Love, anger, confusion, excitment, fear, and much more, it's all expertly and perfectly woven into this kick ** story. The ending was most satisfyong and it totally clear up any questions. All loose ends are tied and all conflicts are resolved. Bangbangstartagain DEFINATELY has talent and I can't effing wait to see what else she has up her sleeve (sorry if you're wearing a t-shirt and if you aren't a girl XD)
I'd reccomend this story to anyone who has a soft spot for romances, but also wants some danger and excitment, and maybe a bit of magic (the wall being a sort of time port-thingy). After reading this story, you'll never see your walls the same way again (I know I didn't =)).

Peace, Love, and Tubesocks,
ToTheWind.
dancing.keys
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseThank goodness that you've got so many chapters in this story! I can't wait to finish reading it all!
.J0ana.
2008-06-13
ch 18,
abuseWOW! This is one of the BEST stories i have ever read. Book or story on here. The plot was so amazingly wonderful. if that even makes any sense. You are such a great writer. I'd give anything to write like that.
-Joana
AMM3485
2008-05-25
ch 18,
abuseThis story was incredible! It was like the movies "Kate & Leopold" and "The Lake House" put together! It was totally awesome!
SapphireEyes16
2008-03-28
ch 18,
abusei luv this story!
rae of light
2008-03-23
ch 18,
abuseWow, that was an amazing story!

I absolutely loved it!

Personally, I think you should publish it!

I would buy it in a second!
Silver Moon Vampire
2008-03-15
ch 18,
abuseI liked it. I can't really give you my comments and suggestions right now because I have to leave, I'm late as it is... but that does really matter to me that much. Anyway, I have one thing I want to suggest, if you haven't done it already, is make a small sequal to how their school life goes and what happens to them in the future... you left it in a past that could possibly have a sequel, it might be a little hard to get it going but I think you can do it. What do you say? Have all the 'populars' gape and stare unbelievingly at Nick and Alice? Come on, don't tell my that doesn't appeal to you...
Gentle. Edge.
2008-03-08
ch 18,
abuseThat was an amazing story. I never knew what to expect and it was really well-written. :)
Gentle. Edge.
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseOhh, interesting way to start off the story. I can't wait to read more. :)
WindUpToy
2008-03-06
ch 18,
abuseOh. My. God.
I love this story so much! It made me laugh out loud at times(causing my parents to look at me funny) and it made me cry and smile and gosh, I just love it.
Thank you for writing such a great story!
I read it all in a matter of hours (I'm a nerd when it comes to books)...yeah, Great story! I'm gonna stop now..!

Keep up the good work!
//Liz
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