Reviews for Walls Apart
choc me 8/13/08 . chapter 18
Oh wow! I'm so so sad it's over! I truly loved it! And it was so well-written too! I'll miss all the characters, especially Nick..sniff!
ileum 8/11/08 . chapter 4
Oh! That makes sense.
ileum 8/11/08 . chapter 1
Move along!

Nicholas seems like an interesting character,

And although his uncle is far from pleasant, the way he talks is just amusing.
Elle Winters 9 8/5/08 . chapter 18
oh wow this was a really great story. I only started reading it when I saw it on your other prfile though, maybe you should repost it under your new profile again?
l'heautontimoroumenos 7/31/08 . chapter 18
Great story. I loved uncle Alfred very much.

You should do a sequel, though, about uncle Alfred or Harry.

Talking about Harry, it's a pity we didn't see a little more of him.

Anyway, real good story.
Skylar Alexander 7/30/08 . chapter 18
This story was brilliant. I enjoyed it very much. Great job.
Skylar Alexander 7/29/08 . chapter 1
Okay, I'm liking this so far, and am curious to see where it'll be going in the later chapters (even though you're done writing it and stuff. XP)

Liked these lines here... "His Uncle greatly resembling a vegetable and cat; all purple and red and hissing profanities." and "practically a naked rabbit amongst a town full of fully clothed foxes?" The former made me laugh, and the latter was just awesome. XP

-Skylar
atreyu love 7/22/08 . chapter 18
i LOVE it.

they are so cute together and im glad

he found a place and adjusted to the 21st century ;)
atreyu love 7/22/08 . chapter 14
aww. they FINALLY kissed! :D
atreyu love 7/22/08 . chapter 9
aww. nick and alice should def. be together.

but who exactly is the Mr Andrews guy?
JC Delacy 7/17/08 . chapter 18
I loved this story so much. I had read it a long time ago but never reviewed because i didnt have a FP account but now that I have: OMG, I LOVED IT!
MiseryLovedHer 7/12/08 . chapter 8
wow! i really liked the part where nic heard the song that was playing in alice's room. es after i downloaded the song and played it as i re-read the scene... its wow...

i can just see it in my head.

that's really ingenius of you. :D
ToTheWind 7/9/08 . chapter 18
bangbangstartagain tells a heart softening story of two young people in a not your everyday relationship. Alice (the leading female) provides the humor of this story and I'll admitt, more than once i laughed out loud, causing innocent bystanders to worry about their safety. Nicholas (the leading male) is a pure gentleman, the kind that every girl wishes she had; I have developed a crush on him that's so bad, it takes pathetic to the next level P. Alice is from the 21th century; Nick is from the 19th century. They meet through a wall in Alice's bedroom, which is also Nick's. By going through the wall, Nick can enter the 21th century and vice versa with Alice in the 19th century. I seriously thought that was an effing stroke of genius. Love, anger, confusion, excitment, fear, and much more, it's all expertly and perfectly woven into this kick ass story. The ending was most satisfyong and it totally clear up any questions. All loose ends are tied and all conflicts are resolved. Bangbangstartagain DEFINATELY has talent and I can't effing wait to see what else she has up her sleeve (sorry if you're wearing a t-shirt and if you aren't a girl XD)

I'd reccomend this story to anyone who has a soft spot for romances, but also wants some danger and excitment, and maybe a bit of magic (the wall being a sort of time port-thingy). After reading this story, you'll never see your walls the same way again (I know I didn't )).

Peace, Love, and Tubesocks,

ToTheWind.
eshlie 7/2/08 . chapter 1
Thank goodness that you've got so many chapters in this story! I can't wait to finish reading it all!
Joana Catarina 6/13/08 . chapter 18
WOW! This is one of the BEST stories i have ever read. Book or story on here. The plot was so amazingly wonderful. if that even makes any sense. You are such a great writer. I'd give anything to write like that.

-Joana
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