i like it explains alot of what happens at night for me and i'm on sleeping pills

can sympathesize. good flow. imagery is especially nice. the portrayal is accurate. who is to blame?

sharp, gnawing imagery accurately conveys the theme. i really liked this, it's tangible. great job!

am suffering with you - have avoided going bed this week to prevent the agony of lying awake...

Boy... Sounds like me on a good night. It was quirky. I liked t ^-^