 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-05 . chapter 1This is quite the unique poem. I really like everything about it, like the title - how clever. The idea of a poem being an author's mother is very unique, and I do love it. I've certainly written my share of "I can't write anything" writer's block poems, but this is the most interesting I've come across. Not only that, you've managed to personify the poem, and you used poetic devices to your advantage. Nicely done. Keep writing! :) |
 Anaare 2007-01-21 . chapter 1A very interesting piece, I have enjoyed reading it. Though were some minor spelling mistakes (mostly typos), they could not take away the enjoyement of reading this. I commend you on good work!
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