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Interesting piece with lots of marvelous images. Good work.

I love the surprising tying-together of different images - listening to breakfast, etc. Just that how even though they're so different, how these words have never been together this way, it flows together very nicely. Kind of like eggs mixing with honey toast, yeah? The intimacy of the narration being directed to this "you" is really awesome. Your wording is so beautiful as usual. :D

You with the smile,

the sweet rust smile.

-this drips spring

and i adore spring

Beautiful, I love the metaphors and imagery.

brill work; the imagery is bare gorgeous. x

simple yet beautiful. nice description using everyday things like tulips and all(: keep writing yea? with all my love, crimson-flowers