Reviews for Calling of a Sinner

bitterlyysweetchoco 2007-01-25 ch 1,	abuseNot quite sure I understand this one too much. It's a good poem though. I would just have to ask... what is the point of /this/ /?/ it does nothing for the poem.
Ironic Presence 2007-01-11 ch 1,	abuseI don't quite know what to say. You cover a lot of strong emotions and capture the hopeless feeling of a sinner's plight. You also ask for redemption in the end, in a way, by asking someone to "Be a half of me, I beg of you, come to my aid, a sinner of sinners", which is kind of cool. I know I feel like the worst person alive at times, and so I can relate to that feeling of sinner's guilt. It's so true; the broken worlds, the shattered glass, the bleeding... and then finally when we're so fed up with being broken we ask for redemption from whoever will take us. good poem.
Retro Gunslinger 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseVery good word choice, that alone impresses me. Your style is quite liberating in and of itself, but I feel like the subject matter has been used to the breaking point. Otherwise, very well, I think I'll go check out what else you've got.
Sophia Victoria 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseNice poem. . . like it very bloody much. . . sinner from hell, x/Hell Phoenix/x
SirScott 2007-01-06 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. I guess we are all sinners. ~SirScott
Maggot Blood 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing and I really liked it and just the general structure of this piece is just powerfull. Wolf.