i can't wait to get the published book. ur an amazingly taleneted writer! ^^

i like this chapter .. but the thing is ..i dont think the published story exactly falls under the same line right like hes a model and she wasnt already friends with kelly .. i dont know if im right i just read the product description but if its not exactly the same do u think you could re post the chapters .. but if nothings changed then my bad.. i will go get the book either way

Hey, this is a really great story, well from what I've seen. I'd purchase the book if I could but I'm banned from buying stuff for a while, lol. Anyway, as i was saying it has a really great plotline and story build up, even though its just the first chapter here, I'll definitely check out your other stories ^^. Keep up the great work.

omg seriously? you're going to publish this story? tough luck. i've read this story if you can call it that. the storyline is such ** american drama overload. i wudve overlooked the ** line but it didnt even get me off at any point in time...seriously...sincere good luck on trying to get this used toilet paper ** published.

omgosh! this is so cute! you should update this!

Hey, I was just wondering what the name of you're book is, and if its available to bu yet? I loved it.

Hi.
I was wondering what the title of your book was, the pen name you used, and if it''s been published yet ?
Sincerely,
Asha

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

this story is absolutely amazing!
kep tme wanting to read more!

Hello!
I am very much interested in this story...so, if it's not too much to ask, I would really appreciate it very much if you could notify on the date when this book will be available in bookstores nationwide. Oh and also the title...and the author name you will use (since I'm sure you're not going to use Has69, right?)
So, yeah. Thank you very much...and good luck with finishing and finally publishing your work!
^_^

OMG, this is one of the best stories I've ever read. I know it's only the first chapter but I love it! I'm glad you got a publisher because I can't wait to finish reading. Please PM me whenever you have more information on when this book will get released. Good luck :D

I had a really difficult time getting into this story - it's not that I dislike it, but I'm left feeling indifferent. I guess what I'm trying to say is that perhaps it would be worthwhile to balance all the dialogue against other factors, such as mood setting. I'm finding it really hard to get a sense of what you're trying to portray. I don't feel like you've taken me as a reader into the "fictonal world" you're trying to create, nor has the story captured and held my attention. Perhaps I'm just impatient, but when I read the first page of a book I know immediately whether this is story I'll hold onto or one I'll just put back down. Does that make sense? Anyway maybe I'm just rambling, but I thought you might like some feedback.

I'm really interested in purchasing the book when it is published. I've been a fan of this story when it first came out, I've read it twice and continued to read the sequel.

I'll PM you when the site lets me.

seems interesting. What is the title of the book? What penname are you using when the books comes out?

Wow. I think this is an amazing story you have here. It is pieced together wonderfully. I hope you can continue it, I saw somthing about you making a book out of it? Well please let me know when i can read more or at least where to look.

Thank you,
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