You really like abstract writing, don't you? This one is no exception. I like it. But it leaves your reader with tons of questions: what was this boy's battle? how is this girl related to this boy? how'd they get to the place in the story? But, I'm sure that's what you were trying to acheive: let it be open to the reader for interpretation. So, you did really well.

THE WAS BITTERSWEET AND I ENJOYED IT!_!