it's disturbing, but i like it. add this in my favorites.

awesome...i love what u did with the two separate lines...kind of undertones behind what u are saying...love it!

COOL! this is like that one that i wrote that can be read as one or two different poems!...i sense some deep rooted anger issues here...is there something you're not telling me?

o... i luv how u turned this into a lullaby at the end! Made the whole thing sorta sing itself to me. Very interesting & spell binding... almost as if it's too powerful to read or blasfamous. XD Haha.. Luv it!

very nice

Powerful.

That's all I can think to say. Great Poem.

-J.A.