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| Idee Fixe 2007-10-07 ch 1,  | abuseThat poem was exteptionally fluid in its writing and the choice of diction was ideal. I also loved the theme of the poem, and how the narrator evolves through the piece. I especially love the second and last stanza. Great job! :D |
| Jarlaxe 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuse* out of * excellent! |
| Maggot Blood 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI find this poem sings to me on many levels and I really liked the line, 'and death makes it harder to die' it was just really really good and I liked it alot. Amazing work. Wolf. |