Brilliant! Your rhymes are superb and flow so easily. It was a real pleasure to read this. :)

That poem was exteptionally fluid in its writing and the choice of diction was ideal. I also loved the theme of the poem, and how the narrator evolves through the piece. I especially love the second and last stanza. Great job! :D

* out of * excellent!

I find this poem sings to me on many levels and I really liked the line, 'and death makes it harder to die' it was just really really good and I liked it alot. Amazing work.

Wolf.