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| Blackened Blood 2008-07-04 ch 30, | abuseI love your story, Its truly amazing! And, to me, a good story can never be long enough. I think this story was jusst riight. Can't wait for the final chappy! Please update soon! |
| x.dynamite 2008-07-04 ch 30, | abuseDAMN, I just read all thirty up-to-date chapters today. And damn, it was worth it. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. Good job writing it :D. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!@! and I'm ABSOLUTELY love sevin's character. |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-07-03 ch 30, | abusei love the story! cant wait till you start your next one! --ifly*hugs* |
| xclarissamariex 2008-07-03 ch 3, | abuseThats so cute! and I resent the whole "still really weird to be chewing in the middle of drinking something." Its friggen awesome ! :o) Have you tried the boba with smoothie/slushie and was it from lollicup? Just asking. I love your story though. Its cute and very "Aw" worthy. :) |
| books4me 2008-07-03 ch 29, | abuseAw, I expect the next chapter (soon?) will be particularly good. :D |
| Inkless 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuse= ] so incredibly happy, so incredibly happy!! thank you! |
| Mary's.Song 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuseYAY! THEY ARE SO CUTE! YAY! I CAN'T STOP SQUEALING! alright. since you suggested it: is Sevin based on a real person? Because, if so, i want to meet him. :) |
| commitmentphobe 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuseAwesome... looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Jayjack 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuseYAY! they finally got together. took long enough. too many circles and avoiding the problem. oh well update when possible. |
| Inanna Skili 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuseAMAZING! Yay, now I can be all fan-girlie and squeal and stuff. I loved this chapter, especially their final confrontation. The part where Carla is trying to start a fight with her, and she just says thank you and leaves is brilliant as well. Also, nice touch with the "Shakespeare hates your emo poems" shirt. I nearly bought that, actually. Go threadless. |
| Joey's-mine 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseFor a first love story..thingy, nice! |
| Espionage In My Shoe 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuseYAY! Hallelujah! Huzzah! And a multiplicity of other interjections expressing immense joy! =D It finally happened! And when I say "finally", I mean that in the nicest, least-impatient, and not-upset way possible. Because I'm actually really glad that it took this long. And I am very, very, very MORE than satisfied (that was horrible grammar) with the way that it went. "It" being the whole Daphne-confessing-to-Sevin thing. The confrontation and whatnot held very true to the characters and I am just... so incredibly content now. =) You rock. This story rocks. I especially liked when Daphne has her realization/whatever-you-call-it moment about how SHE has to go and find Prince Charming. =) That was a really nice touch. And by "nice" I mean flippin' awesome! xD Well, I think I've rambled and been unproductive enough for one review. ;p Until next time! There's no chance I'll miss the finale. ;) You can't get rid of me that easily!! Shoe. |
| Tchy 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abuseBwehehe! x3 Epic. That was awesome! The bit where Sevin exploded at her was probably my favourite part in this chapter. Much love! |
| xemeraldeyesx 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abusewow that confrontation was awesome. yaay question time: how do you write, and edit? is it like all in one go or in bits over a long period of time. i suck at both. and why IS the story so frikkin long? not that i dont love it for that fact. i'll try and think of more questions soon, but im sure you'll have loads to answer! |
| Rhea91 2008-07-02 ch 30, | abusefinally!! you have no idea how long i've been waiting for this to happen!! i'm head over heels in love with sevin now :D simply amazing story.. can't wait for the last update! PS: IS sevin based on a real person?? |