Aw that is so touching! You wrote that in 7th grade? Wow!! Nice job! Its a nice poem. :)

*stares gobsmacked at the screen*

you wrote this in SEVENTH GRADE?!

Sweet baby Jesus.

Ah. This poem is good, but the only thing is that it's so cliche. A lot of poems are like this. However, the rhymes and flow is far better than over half of all the others put together.

amazing... you are simply amazing...

Wow, I finally read this and I have to say that I think this is really amazing. Good job for writing this when you were so young! :)

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you were one talented seventh grader. that was really well written.

Aww... that was sweet, a lot better than my poems...

I love this poem. I still have it taped to our bathroom mirror. :D

Wow, if you wrote this in seventh grade, you have us all beat.

Thats such a cute poem. Pretty, actually. Keep up the great writing!

sunflowersing

dude! lookie what i did! i'm reviewing he he he this is going to be great fun... I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS POEM... oh and don't you dare forget izzy's toes are as red as a rose... ya you know the rest.. luv ya bud!

Amazing, just wow

i like this poem because of the rhythmn and the way you don't feel it necassary to kill the artistic value by rhymning the end words

Awesome poem!! It all fit!