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| MusicTiempoCyn 2008-01-22 ch 1,  | abuseAh. This poem is good, but the only thing is that it's so cliche. A lot of poems are like this. However, the rhymes and flow is far better than over half of all the others put together. |
| krazed.hypa.ivii 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseamazing... you are simply amazing... |
| Marisa Gittinger 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, I finally read this and I have to say that I think this is really amazing. Good job for writing this when you were so young! :) |
| Cute-But-Psyco 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseOMI GOD YOUR POEM IS AWESOME YOU ROCK AW YEA I HAVE I POEM THAT I NEED REVIEWS ON AND YOURS WOULD BE REALLY IMPORTANT CAUSE YOUR SO TALENTED SO GO TO MY PROFILE AND CLICK ON THE ONE THAT SAYS 'UNTILTED' THANX YOUR AWESOME! TOOTLES |
| bubblegum love 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseyou were one talented seventh grader. that was really well written. |
| Jaina-Skylar 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseAww... that was sweet, a lot better than my poems... |
| Shadowed and Shattered 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem. I still have it taped to our bathroom mirror. :D |
| windcriesjimi 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, if you wrote this in seventh grade, you have us all beat. |
| sunflowersing 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThats such a cute poem. Pretty, actually. Keep up the great writing! sunflowersing |
| danielle renee 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abusedude! lookie what i did! i'm reviewing he he he this is going to be great fun... I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS POEM... oh and don't you dare forget izzy's toes are as red as a rose... ya you know the rest.. luv ya bud! |
| Holdmyhandbabyy. 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAmazing, just wow |
| chris saign 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abusei like this poem because of the rhythmn and the way you don't feel it necassary to kill the artistic value by rhymning the end words |
| Ekoaleko 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseAwesome poem!! It all fit! |
| DarthKader 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseHow...sweet and to the point. Pretty Straightfoward, I like how this was written(considering, when I try to write something straightfoward, I end up confusing myself) All in all, great job, I like your stuff. |