I really liked this! There were some parts I was a little iffy on and had to re-read, but overall, a great job! :)

Fantastic. Stylistically a wonderful read, and the story kept up on their own even if the flow hadn't been there. :)

-Milo
(Orion Kohaishu on )

It was kind of random to say the least, but "Danger Will Robinson Danger!" hahaha That I loved. I don't know why, but I did. Clippy, few details, but I don't know, I liked it, I really did, I just can't figure out why, maybe it's the way they talked, kind of broken, left some to the imagination. smile!