Wow...

Wow, that was pretty intense. It was scary at some points, you just kind of drew the reader in. I don't like the italics, but everyone has their own style. I loved the last two lines, they were beautiful.

Thanks for your review. The piano keys/typing thing was that he plays piano. And I write poetry. So I was relating poetry to playing the piano, making a sort of melodic trance. Well, I wrote it FOR him, so I wasn't really thinking about the audience. Thanks for the review again.

Ashelin