Hi *waves*

I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.

Good luck & happy muses

Zhan

OMG! I totally love it! Serious, I don't what it is about this story, I really cant stop thinking about it. And I totally love sean, and Ray seems really interesting too.
So kudos to you, because out of all the really good stories im reading on here, yours really sticks in my head. :D

I hardly ever review stories on here, but I felt kind of obligated with this story [because it's that damn good].
Michael's an ass. I hope Gerald and Sean get together, they would make an extremely adorable couple. I cannot wait to read more!

I really like your story!! I use to really really like Micheal... know i just think he's too possessive. I think Gee and Sean should end up together! :D And Gerald should definatly go to the art college in New York. Please update soon!!

Oh, I'm happy to see this again. :) And I love how you got Michael's big bro psychology right on. I don't know how it is for older/younger siblings, but I know for sure that being a twin, and always ALWAYS having to share everything...it makes a person a little possessive. You're always trying to get something before someone can take it away from you, even if you don't really want it all that much.

I really like this story...but i dont have any questions for any of the characters, your a good writer so it was easy to interpret the story. Truthfully i really want u to post a real chapter... i think everyone would rather u post a real chapter than post a filler chapter about the 'charqacters'.

I just really hope you finish this story rather than abandon it like other writers do. :(

Wow...that was a tear jerker.lol

Amazing story

im kinda hopimg for a sean and gerald couple.lol

Wow, great story

love shawn!

Amazing chapter...ive always loved the angsty stories better then the really fluffy ones

ah... this story keeps me guessing. Michael is pretty stupid, but I somehow understand him. Being what Gerald needs means he has to give up a big part of his world. He grew as a straight popular jock and he is one, in many ways, and it is difficult to change everything especially when he feels that there is no urgent need for him to reveal his love to the public. That doesn't mean that I don't agree with Sean that his brother is a bastard :P I empathize with Michael because I recently had to tell my parents I'm dating someone I knew they wouldn't really approve. The situation was slightly complicated, but not really a scandal (lol... I'm straight and the boy in question is my age - 22 by the way - so absolutely nothing scandalous about us...) but I still knew they will get pissed and make it a big deal. It took me a year to tell them!

One of the few stories that I don't care who the protagonist ends up with. I mean Micheal is an ass but he can turn around right? Ray is such a doll. I don't mind him either. And even Sean would be a good choice. Or someone one new in college in New York. So many possibilities. Just I would like to see him end up with someone happily ever after like. Not trying to tell you what to write are anything, just a desire. Can't wait until you finish this. Jaiyou.

I'm hands down addicted. Stories like these feed my addiction so please help feed my urges?

I really, really can't wait to read more! It's such a thrilling read!! Please update as soon as you can!!

Just so you know, im still following this story :)

But i have no questions... :(