I really loved reading this story. I cried inside while reading it. I really hope there's more coming. I personally thought that all the chapters flowed nicely together. None of the dialog in any of the chapters was out of place or to much.

I can't wait for more! i missed this :)

I would like to read a sequel to this story! Its sad but sweet!

Oh wait. I just read 'the story is complete'? :( well then :) sorry for not noticing it. Great story anyway!

Oh. My. This is one of the most beautiful slash stories I found on this site. Really I can't even. Now I really want to read the next chapter but I guess I need to wait. Still I hope you update sooner :)
Michael is stupid :( he should know how to treat Gerald better, Gee's not like his jock friends... And really curious about Sean now!

dioss! me habia olvidado cuanto me gustaba Sean! sos increible escribiendo! exrtrañaba leerte jaja

que feliz que estoy que vuelvas a publicar tus historias! en especial esta!

You got my name right haha. Thanks for that(and I like how it cuts in right before the last sentence because people will have to read it)!

By the way, yes you did surprise me because I was not expecting such an intense bullying scene because one hasn't shown up in a while. I also like how Sean is there to help Gerald off the ground when it was his brother that put him there. I hope that they become really good friends and Michael becomes super jealous(because I really don't like him thinking he's so high and mighty then walks away).

There was a few misspellings or grammar problems, but something I can look over. The part where you say Sean comes out should have been divided somehow because I had to reread it to understand the transition.

Good luck on the next chapter!

Michael, I dislike you greatly. You can't be selfish and declare that you still have Gerald when you basically left him behind for your other friends...still rooting for Gerald and Ray to end up together.

Sean is gay? New twist, I like it.

Is it bad that I want Gerald to end up with Ray in the end? Seriously Michael is too naive for Gerald and I only met Ray yet I like him more...it's scientifically proven that similar people are more attracted to each other than opposites! haha it's your story but I really do like Ray so far and Mike already has a girlfriend to occupy his thoughts with and it's only hurting Gerald...

Uh wah i really like this story xD keep up the good work!

YAHHH SO CUTE OHMGEE MY TONGUE IS NUMBBBB UHH WAHWIGAW I LOVE THIS O_O

I have.../no/ idea why, but I legitimately cried during this chapter.

It's just. Dx Michael is so mean.

/wanders off to finish reading

Con

god the guy is so oblivious

I wasn't going to read this yet because I love FPOV and I haven't been in the mood to read anything other than that for years but when I skimmed over the first chapter I just had to and I love this. I love everything about this story from the characters to the scenery to how well it's written. I'm going to keep reading now but I had to review here because this was the chapter you completely hooked me.