OH MY GOD. I knew it would take something big for Michael to be pushed into making his move, but I didn't expect THAT. I wonder how May and Ray (lol, did you intentionally make them rhyme?) will react?

This story never ceases to amaze me with how well it's written. There may be some gramatical errors, but the emotions that you put into each chapter, and the way they flow and how everything just falls together so well makes any technical errors seem meaningless. Hehe, I was just about to go to sleep when I noticed that this story had been updated, and I had to stay up to read the latest chapter, because I knew it would be amazing and I was not dissapointed.

I do hope Micheal stops being stupid though. Me being the impatient person that I am, I just want them to run into each others arms already. But, I'll be patient for your story. The pace it's going at only makes the overall effect that much better. The suspense kills me, but in a good way. )

Moose

It's cute imagining Gerald hide behind Ray.

omg this story is so good...i can't wait for the next chapter. ahh i wish michael would stop being such a jerk and believe gerald that it was frank. update soon please. great story.

This chapter was not boring at all. I liked getting a bit of a backstory on Gerald. It's interesting to see a bit of his mother's history, and your writing style would make it interesting even it hadn't already been.

Moose

I like the back story. It makes me feel more sympathetic to Nina than I had been. I really hpe she pulls herself together.

I got you to send this one to me right? lol

Mrs. Harrison is a good character. I like the way she talks.

You have a good writing style. It isn't overly descriptive, which leaves a lot to the imagination, but then you add little things here and there to piece the puzzle together, whether it be what somebody looks like or their past. That's good, I like it a lot. It makes everything more subtle and intriguing.

You're characters are all awesome, even the bad ones like Frank. You have a nice blend of static and dynamic characters.

Update really soon!

No! He still needs Michael! No, no, no! Bah! That's bad!

Poor, poor Gerald. ): I've grown attached to him and reading about him being beaten up by Frank was terrible. Though, it wasn't as bad as it could've been, because Gerald still seemed to retain some dignity throughout the fight.

But then of course Michael had to ruin that.

Ah, well, I still like Sean. I think he's my favorite character.

I want to hit Michael with a blunt object. He can be SO STUPID. Blah!

I like Sean more and more though. I hope he doesn't turn out like his brother. That would be bad for everyone. x)

Nah... deep down inside, I want Michael to get wise. Sigh.

I like Sean... wise younger brother. Like Yoda, only not as old. And a brother. And nothing like Yoda..?

Hah, anyway. Hm... Ray's a character. Not sure whether to like him or be wary, but I'm just going to go with liking him for now. Gerald deserves somebody nice.

I can't believe Michael forgot. x(

Okay, I lied. Maybe Michael isn't a stupidhead after all. Granted, he's a little stupid about some things. But he's totally nice and adorable as well.

Aw, heh... it kind of seems like Gerald has a little raincloud above his head. ): At least his mom tried with the belated birthday party thing. That was nice of her. Despite a lack of parenting skills, she loves her son. That's good.

That's horrible! I feel so bad for Gerald. ): I want to kick Frank in his imaginary face. And Michael, for that matter, for being a stupidhead. Yes. Stupidhead.

I've had that same conversation that Sandra was saying...about how guys think it's okay for girls to kiss but that it's completely disgusting if guys do...it always ends with me yelling "YOU'RE JUST A USELESS HYPOCRITE!"

So what's this about Gee getting his name? O_O

I love how you connect the never getting up thing, the day on the beach, and the happiness they had together. Sad.

This story is depressing. If I kill myself, it's your fault. :P BUT I LOVE IT! Heh. _

xo