ah ! ish arla`shay ! lmao hm...this is very interesting..."But ii like comics." lmao...hilarious...

keep it up !

and its good..like ii wouldnt have enuf imagination to do something like this...=)

uh oh...bells gone...

latahz..

Very cute, great characterization. I like your writing - you have a great style and excellent grammar. *Another excellent piece*

--Lady of Many Worries

Hi,
Very awesome. You should write more, I'll bet you $50.00 that if you did it would get published. It would totally be a crime not to continue it.

Sincerely,
Blithe F. Crossfirek

awee, this is adorable! Nice job.

It's weird when that happens in stories--the characters hate the ones they love because they love them. But with the fear of getting hurt and everything it's reasonable.

“I prefer it that way; does a good friend not stab you in the front?” I ask innocently.

^ I love that line so much. It just grabbed my attention mostly since I never read it put like that before. Anywho, great story. :D