Beautiful! Beautiful! I love you, Anne

I liked this; I liked it a lot. It's written with your customary flair, and the characters bear the mark of your genius. It is a pleasure to read.

definitaley interesting. I've been reading the dangerverse stories, and this is similar and still very different. it doesn't really stand up on it's own, though. it feels more like the prologue to something.

Wow! I love your Harry Potter fics, so I just decided to check this out, and I'm so glad I did! You have an amazing talent for writing. The one thing I wonder is why you aren't publishing your own books--but I hope you won't stop writing here--especially because I'm desperately waiting for an update on Facing Danger! The one suggestion I have is that you might more clearly set up your world--I'm not really clear on what the lyrror are; then again, I've only read this one fic so far. But I definitely had no problem getting sucked in.

I loved it! The world you've created and all the words and people in it is a little confusing to me, but it didn't interupt the flow of the story. Very nice little story, and I adored the ending :D

Oh wow, this was beautiful. I loved it, I think you did a fantastic job and the Romeo and Juliet was a nice touch. It gave a touch of familiarity in a story filled with unfamiliar things (like the war and the creatures). I enjoyed it immensely and look forward to reading your other stories.

That was nice. Brilliantly creative, especially the language and names. I was a bit confused as to what sort of timeframe this is supposed to be in - such as pre-gunpowder or maybe post-gunpowder, seeing as they took the train? Whatever the era, I enjoyed it all the same and I'm rather interested in what this "Dangerous Truths" story is all about. Is it the same story as the one you coauthored with Neurotica, on Couldn't possibly be, but I'm terribly interested to know what everyone is claiming will be at the top of the bestseller lists. I just might throw my support and allegiance behind it too! ;)

a bit abrupt, and a bit cliche, but a 10 out of 10 none the less. i like this new universe that you've started! keep adding on. (and update facing danger--i want to know what happens next!)

Ah, so you can write original stuff as well as your fanfic. I was very nearly tempted to tell my creative writing prof you were one of my favorite short story writers. However, I did spend a lot of time in this story wondering when and how this world split from ours after shakespeare--background please!

I loved, really adored it! Kathryn is very believeable, as is Thomas. This is very good, and extremely well written. Keep up the amazing work!

That was an awesome story. I liked it a lot! The only thing that took away from it was the modern language that the main characters spoke with. It took away from the setting of the story. But other than that, I really enjoyed it. Maybe I'll add it to my favs list.

Have I mentioned how much I love this story? I'm sure I have on chat, but in case I didn't say it enough...

I LOVE IT!

Talk to you on chat!

Brushy

Hey this is really good. I'm a big fan of dangerverse and rapidly becoming a fan of these stories.

I really like it. I'm a fan of your Living with Danger work, so this is a bit different, but this is also really good! I can't wait to find out more about the Guvabor.

Is the quote at the beginning from The Tempest?

Tempest quote, reference to Taming of the Shrew, Romeo and Juliet quotes, Midsummer Night's Dream quote, and I know I know the line "If it be thus to dream" but I don't know where it comes from!