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Reviews For: Just Us

Imagined Insanity 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI loved this, one because it was extremely well written (kudos to you) and two because it was great to see a story that was so completely... just the people, and no 'gender wall'. just... characters. it was great. (i now scamper off to read your other stories.)
Pinkamoo 2007-09-14 ch 1,	abuseVery cute! Good job my girl! I think you misspelled 'foot' and put 'food' instead on one bit. But it's all good!
as beauty dies 2007-06-08 ch 1,	abuseReally, really cute. I absolutely adore it. The whole thing is just so... Guh, adorable. I can honestly only think of that and 'eccentric', but the former out weighs the latter. So. God. Damn. Adorable. It really is quite beautiful in that sense. Characterization--er, the build up of their relationship--is well paced while not changing them too much; Thu with his theatrics and Taylor with her--or is it a guy? ^^;--sarcastic-ness. It's really a nice juxtaposition that really makes things all the sweeter toward the end. That, and Taylor. Oh, and Thu. Gotta love Thu. I'm seriously scared about going to the dentist on Tuesday. This surely must have given me a cavity. Or seven. OMG. ...Yeah, you've reduced me to internet-slang just to explain just the utter-- Grr. Another fan-girl attack. So. CUTE! Oh, and I love the this: [“Yes, I’ll be your girlfriend. But I did not get you in trouble. If you hadn’t worn that damn lipstick, I wouldn’t have wanted to kiss you!” At this, Thu turned around on his knees so that he was facing Anh. “Dearest Anh, besterest buddy ever—” She snorted. “If you would agree to help me by lending me lipstick and teaching me how to apply it, I would love you for the rest of my natural life.” He glanced over at me. “In a completely platonic way, of course.” She smiled sweetly and asked, “And why exactly would you want me to do this for you?” “I want you to do it because Taylor just said that she wouldn’t have kissed me if I hadn’t looked so damn hot in lipstick—” “I did not say that, goddamnit!” “Whatever. You implied it. So, Anh, how about it?”] Have you seen Ouran? Well...Thu reminds me of Tamaki with that scene (except, Idunno, slyer?). He's adorable and quick and, aw~♥ Why Taylor didn't give in to the desire to make-out with him is beyond me; she's just being difficult, ne? ...Oh. And if you haven't seen Ouran, don't worry. The comment is positive. ^_^ So cute, so very cute. ... Oh, since this is going to so be your fault: my dentist hates you. - Noelle P.S. I noticed minor spelling mistakes. Like, instead of the word "the" you have "he" or similar things. And it only happened once.
Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1,	abuseThis was so cute! I was supressing laughter almost the whole way through...especially at the end, with the lipstick part. But I'm not sure I get it, because the ending was odd. I feel like there's something I'm missing...why did he ask her that? Is he really a girl? Like, a gender identity sort of thing? The reason I wonder is because you added that note at the end about the Vietnamese names, and that his was girlish. I'll probably never know if you're one of those author's that don't reply to reviews...but anyway, I liked it.
Random reviewee 2007-02-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked your character of Thu. He was funny.
DeepBlueEcho 2007-01-24 ch 1,	abusei really like this. it's refreshingly original and new. great writing.
the Berserker 2007-01-08 ch 1,	abuseWow. I'm not a big fan of hetro romance stories but that was really cool! Boys in lipstick... yummy :D
Tchy 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseBwahaha, awesome! xD Thu and Taylor's interaction is so funny! You did a great job on this.

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