THAT WAS JUST SOO AMAZING!
Very original too. :D
I loved Thu's personality and how playful and determined he is to win over Taylor. and Taylor is just adorable. Anh is very amusing too. :]

I LOVED IT.

[Anh is another Vietnamese name. I don’t know the meaning and I don’t know how to describe the way it’s pronounced, but sometimes people pronounce it the same way as the name “Ann.”]

"Anh" usually means "bright", "famous" or "glowing" but sometimes it depends on the word before it. My name is Anh, Giao Anh, and it means "the united light" ^^

P.S/ Are you Vietnamese?

I think I can think of some guys who would look 'smashing' in dark red lipstick, too. =D

Brilliantly cute story by the way! But did he like at first glance and asked her out? Or was that just his way of teasing but eventually became real?

Hi, I was wondering if I could use this idea for a fanfic. I can give you credit and all that jazz. I just thought this idea would fit a couple of characters perfectly.

If you could let me know, that would be fantastic.

Thanks,

-Simplicity

Very cute and sweet

I loved this, one because it was extremely well written (kudos to you) and two because it was great to see a story that was so completely... just the people, and no 'gender wall'. just... characters. it was great. (i now scamper off to read your other stories.)

Very cute! Good job my girl! I think you misspelled 'foot' and put 'food' instead on one bit. But it's all good!

Really, really cute.

I absolutely adore it. The whole thing is just so... Guh, adorable. I can honestly only think of that and 'eccentric', but the former out weighs the latter.

So. God. Damn. Adorable.

It really is quite beautiful in that sense. Characterization--er, the build up of their relationship--is well paced while not changing them too much; Thu with his theatrics and Taylor with her--or is it a guy? ^^;--sarcastic-ness. It's really a nice juxtaposition that really makes things all the sweeter toward the end.

That, and Taylor. Oh, and Thu. Gotta love Thu.

I'm seriously scared about going to the dentist on Tuesday. This surely must have given me a cavity. Or seven.

OMG. ...Yeah, you've reduced me to internet-slang just to explain just the utter--

Grr. Another fan-girl attack.

So. CUTE!

Oh, and I love the this: [“Yes, I’ll be your girlfriend. But I did not get you in trouble. If you hadn’t worn that damn lipstick, I wouldn’t have wanted to kiss you!”

At this, Thu turned around on his knees so that he was facing Anh. “Dearest Anh, besterest buddy ever—” She snorted. “If you would agree to help me by lending me lipstick and teaching me how to apply it, I would love you for the rest of my natural life.” He glanced over at me. “In a completely platonic way, of course.”

She smiled sweetly and asked, “And why exactly would you want me to do this for you?”

“I want you to do it because Taylor just said that she wouldn’t have kissed me if I hadn’t looked so damn hot in lipstick—”

“I did not say that, goddamnit!”

“Whatever. You implied it. So, Anh, how about it?”]

Have you seen Ouran? Well...Thu reminds me of Tamaki with that scene (except, Idunno, slyer?). He's adorable and quick and, aw~♥ Why Taylor didn't give in to the desire to make-out with him is beyond me; she's just being difficult, ne?

...Oh. And if you haven't seen Ouran, don't worry. The comment is positive. ^_^

So cute, so very cute.

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Oh, since this is going to so be your fault: my dentist hates you.

- Noelle

P.S.

I noticed minor spelling mistakes. Like, instead of the word "the" you have "he" or similar things. And it only happened once.

This was so cute! I was supressing laughter almost the whole way through...especially at the end, with the lipstick part. But I'm not sure I get it, because the ending was odd. I feel like there's something I'm missing...why did he ask her that? Is he really a girl? Like, a gender identity sort of thing? The reason I wonder is because you added that note at the end about the Vietnamese names, and that his was girlish. I'll probably never know if you're one of those author's that don't reply to reviews...but anyway, I liked it.

I liked your character of Thu. He was funny.

i really like this. it's refreshingly original and new. great writing.

Wow. I'm not a big fan of hetro romance stories but that was really cool! Boys in lipstick... yummy :D

Bwahaha, awesome! xD Thu and Taylor's interaction is so funny! You did a great job on this.