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Reviews For: Sticks & Stones
aya's notebook 2008-06-22 . chapter 1
yea, almost ;)
she smolders 2007-04-01 . chapter 1
I wonder why is it that the most poetic things are the ones that are broken. I like this a lot.
in a jar pk 2007-02-15 . chapter 1
pretty. x
star blanket river child 2007-01-15 . chapter 1
I do believe I've found my new favorite poet here, darling. This is even better than your last one.

I adore the image of the poet in the closet. Whether you take it literally or metaphorically, it's a great image. It's interesting because I can relate to it as being the poet myself or having someone else be the poet I've locked up. It's insanely inspiring.

"the tears he sheds for his broken morale" Favorite line.

And the ending... belle. It's beautiful.

Post more soon. I'm addicted. (And starting to sound like a crazed stalker... sorry. :P)
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-08 . chapter 1
What a clever little poem. I love the second stanza of this, with the idea of breaking ink and paper and then how you could physically smash someone's way of putting words onto paper. So interesting and unique. Keep writing! :)
Crimson Flowers 2007-01-06 . chapter 1
really beautiful(: ~with all my love, crimson flowers~
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